The monster throws back its delirious head
Eyes roll and slam shut it is said
Its whole body creaks to a tense stop
The whistling suction of breath fills it to a pop
Slimy mouth thrown wide
Arms go flailing beside
Here it comes with a AHHHH CHOOOOOOO
Head bolts forward closing in on you
Mucus catapults absolutely everywhere
The man just sneezed so please don’t stare
A Thinker's Guide to Nonsense 
Haha you got a little chuckle out of me. I like the idea.
The rhythm feels a bit unsteady to my drummer’s ears, but I see it as a sacrifice in favor of the rhyme and story of the poem.
Good work! (p.s. I post poems on my blog if you’re interested…)
Yeah I can see that, but the poem was mainly just for the story itself. Thanks and I’ll come have a read of your poems now 🙂
I like your style! I’m a student writer as well, going to look into poetry next year. I’d love your comments when I post some myself 🙂
Thank you, I’m looking to write some more lighthearted poems but none have formed in my head yet…time and a cuppa is probably all is needed ha! That’s great we should help each other out if we’re both rather poetry novices? Yeah I’ll definitely comment, just let me know when you’ve got some poetry up 🙂