A Waterfall of sorts

A thundering fountain

Careering off a mountain

Pounding and drilling its way into the water

Pummelling with vengeance like torture

Thickening roars sound around

As spray soars from deep down

And that’s a human being

Just a man peeing.



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8 thoughts on “A Waterfall of sorts

  1. Novroz says:

    Hahaha I love the humor on the last sentence. Nice poem, who would have thought peeing could be art πŸ˜‰

  2. joejames93 says:

    Thank you! And of course it must be art hahaa. Poetry is my new thing so be sure to check back for some more, interesting?, (may be the right word) poems. Thanks again for the comment

  3. tessf says:

    Reminds me of that Dave Barry’s Guide to Guys, where he suggests that while a woman will stand and marvel at the vastness of the Grand Canyon, a guy will find some friends, line them up and see who can pee the furthest into it. πŸ™‚

  4. joejames93 says:

    Hahaha @tess that does sound about right! πŸ™‚

  5. Hi thats really good, I showed it to my girl friend and she was really serious reading it till she got to the end and found it really hilarious.
    I will come back to look for more

  6. joejames93 says:

    Hey, thank you means a lot. I’m really glad to hear that because it was the response I was hoping from the reader, a little bit of shock and amusement!
    I haven’t posted much poetry recently but I will be back on it after the frantic time of Christmas, so please do pop by again πŸ™‚

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